Starbucks Mistakes

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As the completion of essay one I learned a lot about the Starbucks culture, but as I was reading the comments made by Nishi I gained more knowledge as a writer. The careless mistakes I made consisted of wrong grammar usage and spelling errors. Another minor mistake that was found in my essay was the title, it was not a catchy. As a writer you need to think about your audience and the one thing that attracts another reader is the title, so I learned to title my future essays with something a little less broad. On the other hand, I made major errors as well, such as not being able to explain an example I provided in my introduction. When this happens the audience tends to get confused because as a writer I know what I am talking about, but the

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