Personal Narrative: My Writing

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“Writing is an exploration. You start from nothing and learn as you go” (BrainyQuote). It is shown in this quote that when you begin writing you know nothing, you have to learn and develop a writing style as you write more, it takes time to become a good writer. Throughout my many years of writing, my writing styles have changed greatly. In middle school I had never written an essay based on a book. This year I have gone from being utterly confused on how to write an essay about a book, to having a full understanding of what I’m writing. This year is the year that I have grown more than any other, all because of my teacher, Mrs. Johnson. She has helped me become the best writer I can be this year. In this essay I will reflect on how my writing …show more content…

For example, when writing The Odyssey essay, I began not fully supporting my claim. I was not used to stating a quote to support my claim, and analyzing it fully because I had never done it before. Now, after writing essays and getting practice, I understand how to fully support my claims and quotes. I can find figurative language, tone, mood, conflict, etc., and I can explain why the author decided to use the quote in their writing. Another example is, using vocabulary in my essays to make it formal. In years past I had not used vocabulary in my writing. This year I used as many vocabulary words as I could. In each essay I wrote I tried to include at least twenty vocabulary words, some better than others. The vocabulary makes my essays easy to understand, they help my essay transition smoothly, and they add on to the formality of the essay I am …show more content…

A weakness I have is analyzing the quotes I choose to use in my body paragraphs. I have never been good at fully breaking down a quote and explaining its true meaning. For example, in The Odyssey essay, I analyzed my quotes in about 2-3 sentences. When rewriting the essay I quickly learned that my analysis needed to be much longer. By the time we wrote the Romeo and Juliet essay, I was able to create a full analysis, but I cannot fully breakdown the quotes I chose to use. I have a hard time getting below the surface and explaining the deeper meaning. Another weakness I have is grammar, I have also never been good at grammar. Whenever I get my graded essays back I discover many grammatical errors which could have been avoided. I make many common mistakes, like, not using a semicolon when needed, putting a comma in the wrong place, and I am very bad at sentence structure. Next year I will be sure to ask for help and work on my grammar. A strength I have in writing is my imagination, my imagination helps me visualize the book I am reading which helps me when I am writing. I look back on what I read in the book and I can visualize it so I can have a better time writing. Even though I am not very good at analyzing, my imagination makes it to where I can point out imagery and figurative language. I am sure that I have other strengths in writing but of course I

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