Reflection Essay

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“High school english teachers are preparing you for college level writing!” Says a high school english teacher. However, they were wrong; level one of Writing Composition gripped everything I knew and hurled it into the abyss of knowledge, leaving my understanding of writing a clean slate. This time, I had to put in work just to get a B in Longoria’s class, but I respected that; high school level writing curriculum was simply regurgitated information passed on to each ascending grade, making it effortless to get a 95 or higher. Writing Composition taught me the objectives I needed to know to succeed and I became a better writer because of it. While the essays I have developed throughout Longoria’s class shows improvement of communication and personal responsibility, I can still use more enhancement of critical thinking into my essays. …show more content…

For example, I explained that, “Conveniently, nuclear energy can efficiently provide power to meet demands 365 days a year with no compromises. To compare with other sources,” (Findley, “An Atomic Revolution…” 3). I thought that using an appropriate amount of transitions in each of my body paragraphs would help greatly with the overall organization of my paper. Another example of good organization was exhibited in my second essay, where I stated, “Looking back on my individual scores, I was surprised and in denial when I was recorded as below the national average. To be more specific, I disagree with the extraversion and agreeableness traits in particular. In general,” (“A Temperament Assessment…” 3). Reflecting on this quote, I think that the use of transitions displayed here might be too abundant; however, they were necessary for the management of the ideas that I introduced in that body

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