Improving My Essay Writing

The human being is created in this world to learn something every day. Also, he or she is to improve himself or herself. In the learning process people make mistakes all the time, and naturally, they learn a lot from their own and other’s mistakes. It is the same as my situation about my class. My goal that I was hoping to achieve was to pass my English class with a good grade. It has happened as I was hopping, and I learned from my own mistakes. I had English 49 last semester which I had a lot of problems with my first essay. My struggle was all in my first essay but after that I got good grades on my other assignments. For this reason, when I started my first essay, I did not know how to write and what to write. When I handed in my English paper, I was patiently waiting to get my paper back so I could see my mistakes. A week later, my English instructor handed the paper back to me, and I was finally able to see my mistakes and the errors that I had made in my essay. After reviewing my paper, I realized that I needed to focus on using correct grammar, writing structure, and clearer details in order to improve my writing skills.

First of all, when I read my paper, I realized that grammar is one of my major problems that I needed to work on. There were many ways that I worked on to improve my grammar. The easy way that I fixed my paper was by correcting my grammar. There were many ways that I knew how to get help to improve my essay. For example, I went to a computer lab, and I got help from the computer by working on a grammar helping program. Also, there were many ways that I got help, such as going to the Modesto Junior College Writing Center. At the Writing Center, There are many people available there that helped me with my...

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...or she should be confident about their writing. I learned that it is going to be easier by reviewing the essay and focus on the major problems. It is going to help everyone to improve their writing skills. After I was done reading my paper, I learned my problems that next time I have to focus more on my problems and put more attention. By putting more effort, it will be easy to organize my essay. My goal was to pass the class with a good grade. The significant of this story was that I finally end up getting a good grade, and that makes me feel good. The important thing about it was that I learned many things about how to instruct the essay from beginning to the end. After I went and checked my grade, it was a big shock for me that I passed my class and achieved my goal. It made me very happy because I could move to the higher classes with having a lot of knowledge.