Analysis Of The Article: How Technology Affects Us

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In response to the article ‘How Technology Affects Us’, I am writing to inform you about my views on the controversial issues raised. The majority of the article consists of the writer accusing technology of having a negative influence on the lives of teenagers, however the writer herself is a teenager, meaning her views might be biased and may represent her own personal problems with technology and not that of a larger audience, making almost every statement unreliable. This includes them stating that technology “separates individuals from reality”. The writer then argues that listening to music is a sign of “disconnecting yourself from the real world”. I would like to ask if the writer has any concrete evidence to support this. Music is a …show more content…

Technology is the medical equipment that saves billions of lives every year, technology is the phones we use to call our loved ones from abroad, technology is the electricity we use to power every and all of the amenities within our houses. A world without the technological devices that are used in aiding our health and happiness’s is a world that is backwards and undesirable. Not all technological devices have a “negative influence” in our everyday lives, unless the writer is suggesting that we as a people no longer rely on the fascinating medical and social advancements that technology has allowed us to undergo. In addition, this very article was published and created on a computer: a product of technological advancement and yet the writer still make the insensible and generalizing claim that technology has “negatively influenced” the younger generations. As a teenager, I myself can testify that this so called “negative” application of scientific knowledge and hindrance of communication is rarely present in my personal use of technology. In actuality, it does quite the opposite, as it can be used to send urgent messages, which brings me to my next point: this article argues that people are seen “rapidly texting”. Has this not been considered as being possibly caused by a dangerous scenario or an urgent need to send across information? The article is very vague about the situations where the said technological …show more content…

The study shown in this article states that “those who use the Internet frequently spend over 100 minutes less time with family and friends than non-Internet users.” The problem with this statistic is that the wording of it is too vague. The statement “100 minutes less”, gives no indication as to what temporal value these 100 minutes are being compared to. Is the writer suggesting we spend 100 minutes per day on technology? Or perhaps they mean 100 minutes per decade? Confusing and unexpanded, this statement will leave us wondering what point the writer is trying to

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