The very first things that stand out from the essay are quotations and examples from The Kite Runner written by Khaled Hosseini and it was the biggest misconception I made in the essay. Those quotes and examples I provided in order to support the argument and make the essay more effective and stronger which I thought would appeal to the readers’ emotions. Just before writing my assignment for the philosophy class I read The Kite Runner for my English reading class and I was emotionally touched by the events described in that book so without realizing I used the quotes and examples from it. I assumed that it would be great for supp...
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...ck of understanding the audience and its interest played a significant role in writing an unsuitable essay. Despite that, through this rhetorical analysis I was able to examine it thoroughly and see how it could be more effective. By making the essay more formal, eliminating hasty generalization, and providing more evidence to support the claim and make paragraph’s structure strong and reliable, the essay would be more productive. In addition, in order to write a good essay it is necessary for me to analyze my audience first so I would know what rhetorical choices to make. Not only do the choices matter but also choosing the right topic for particular audience in order to make them involved.
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