Describe The Changes And Revisions You Made To Your Proposal

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Describe the changes and revisions you made to your proposal along the way:

When I first created this proposal it was because of the large amounts of sexual assault issues that I have heard in the news. I wanted to figure out a way to prevent people from being assaulted because most high school and college students are just taught how to say no to sexual activities but not taught how to defend themselves if the perpetrator gets violent. I thought the best way to do this was through self defense classes because if people have the confidence to defend themselves against a violent person, they have a smaller chance of being attacked. At first I was not sure where the classes should be taught in the high school curriculum, but I ultimately decided it should be added to the physical education curriculum because it fit in there best. At first, I …show more content…

However, after receiving advice from fellow caucus members, I added more information on how self defense classes are beneficial in general. Examples of this are whereas clauses I added including, “training in self defense helps people develop more confidence in themselves and their surroundings.” Another large issue I had when creating this proposal was how to structure the actual class. Many caucus members as well as my consultants had differing views on this idea. At first, I decided to completely segregate the classes because as a girl myself, I thought I would be more comfortable learning to fight if I was not around boys. This is because boys are often thought of being more

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