The Pledge Of Allegiance Essay

856 Words2 Pages

Gwen Wilde wrote an essay on “Why the Pledge of Allegiance Should be Revised.” In this essay, Gwen believes that the words “under God” should be removed from the Pledge of Allegiance. Gwen informs us that the original Pledge did not include “under God” and the words were not added until 1942, therefore, the words can easily be removed. Although some changes have been made to make it clear that the Pledge of Allegiance is for the United States Gwen believes that the words “under God” do not show any support for our country and only make those who do not believe in God feel uncomfortable. Therefore, Gwen believes that “under God” is not appropriate for the Pledge and does not show that we are a Nation that is “indivisible.”
Gwen provides …show more content…

First, she responds to Chief Justice Rehnquist who said that the words “under God” were a descriptive phrase. Gwen’s reply to Chief Justice Rehnquist was that descriptive means it describes something real or imagined and for many people they do not believe in God so therefore it is not a descriptive phrase. Gwen does agree with Chief Justice that reciting the Pledge is patriotic but at the same time having the words “under God” makes people declare a religion they may not believe in so removing the words would make it just patriotic. The final argument that Gwen responds to is that many people believe that saying the words “under God” in the Pledge is the same as spending money that has “In God We Trust” on it. Gwen argues that it is not the same because when spending money we are just handing it over and view it as a transaction, therefore, it is not offensive but when saying the Pledge you are conscious of making the declaration of believing in something you really don’t believe in. Although Gwen uses statistics, arguments and emotion to try and persuade people to remove “under God” from the Pledge of Allegiance I believe her arguments for why it should be removed could be stronger and her responses to those who say it doesn’t need to be removed could be better

Open Document