Persuasive Speech About The Drinking Age

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Nowadays, most weekend nights all you see is drunk college kids roaming the streets of Duluth. A huge controversy between young adults and older adults is whether the drinking age should be 18 or 21. Today I will be talking about what works best with my organization, some organizational changes I need to make, my effectiveness of evidence, improvements of my delivery, improvement to my style, and improvements I need to make for the future. My information on the screen worked best with my organization because it was short and simple. When keeping your information short and simple, you can use meaningful words that stick with the audience, so they can remember it. Another thing that worked best with my organization is my outline. This worked best with my organization because I could set up my PowerPoint with it so the structure of my presentation was correct. An organizational change that I need to make is taking information of the screen and put it into a note card. I noticed I was reading of the PowerPoint slides too much and that interferes with the sound of my voice to the audience. Another one is meeting the full requirements of the speech. I thought we needed 4 sources, but the requirement was 5. A change that I plan on making is finishing my presentation and then going over …show more content…

I will do this by finishing my presentation and go over the checklist, and I will make changes if needed. I also need to make note cards, so that will help me stop reading off the projector screen. I also need to make sure I enunciate and have good pronunciation of my words so I don’t mumble. I will also need to improve going into monotone as that makes the speech boring. I will also need to improve my conclusions. When I practice my speech, I tend to skip going over my conclusion and it hurts me in the long run. I need to have an impactful conclusion that the audience will remember me

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