Not Enough Supporting Research for "Addiction in Free Markets"

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So what? After reading Bruce Alexander’s and Stefa Shaler’s essay “Addiction in Free Markets”, this would be the first reaction of many readers, as it was my reaction upon completion of the essay. Although Alexander and Shaler discussed a very important issue concerning ‘Addiction in Free Markets’, they do not provide sufficient resources or correlative research to prove their argument. Firstly, their thesis statement does not agree with many of the facts and statements that are being presented throughout the essay. Moreover, the essay sidetracks from what it is trying to prove to other aspects in life that are not related with the topic, and the transition of paragraphs is also not smooth. Also, the centuries of English and Native Canadians histories that are referred to extensively by Alexander and Shaler do not provide sufficient evidence to support their argument. Clearly they are maximizing the issue in a nutshell, but they are incoherently trying to get this point across, without much real meaning.

“Most people who cannot achieve a reasonable degree of psychological integration find that they must develop ‘substitute’ lifestyles in order to endure” (Alexander and Shaler 230), is the composition they are trying to prove throughout this essay. However, there are many instances throughout the essay in which the subject does not refer back to the main thesis or theory. Moreover, there are selections of phrases in the beginning paragraphs before the thesis is introduced without much real meaning. They are long-winded, unnecessary, and are not needed where presented. Although Alexander and Shaler provide a solid history and understanding of the issue, phrases such as “We’ve gone too far toward the free market extreme, and one o...

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...ion; more people are accustomed to what is going on today – rather than what was going on back in the 18th-19th centuries. It is not the dislocation that has portrayed this view upon numerous people – it is the changing time that has changed people, and the way that people think.

Ultimately, although the authors present an interesting argument, there are some flaws in their presentation and argument. The authors, often, fail to provide adequate references to validate their arguments. In addition, the arguments do not always lined up with the thesis statement. The authors tend to go off topic on several occasions. Lastly, the effects of colonialism arguments do not find base in concrete facts and statistics. Although “Addiction In Free Markets” does present knowledgeable information, it does not have the solidity to sway the reader’s perspective on the matter.

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