Creative Writing An Alternate Ending Essay

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A violent shiver convulsed me back to life as I was dragged back from the perilous gates of the invisible choir. All that time, I wanted a better life. I screamed, but to no avail. Just awoken, I felt inclined to sleep…like my legs and arms were fastened to the hospital bed with ligatures restraining me. (I conjectured) My breathing spasm finally came to a cessation the moment my consciousness began to take shine. I saw blurred images which I perceived it to be the fan spinning at terminal velocity but in the posture that I laid, I could only conjecture that it must have cause the shiver. In great uneasiness, I cried out in a shrill voice something incomprehensible just to see if I’m still dreaming. That was when I realize I was as dependable …show more content…

The gleaming glass grilling at the door was dripping with water. It hung on the few threads of hinges, groaning with pain at every sway. As I pushed the door open, I braced myself for the worst of humanity; the area was too wet; not even the sun’s enigmatic smile could keep me from the haunting fear of solidity and sinister loneliness. Water droplets vaguely sang a tune on the roofs and puddles all around me like the aftermath of a dreadfire with invisible multitude. The windows were sprinkled with moist grass and sand. The droll dead voice of the dying wind cried out an admonishing tone as though its mocking spirit within has lost its assurance. The streets outside were damped in all manners possible; the only pavements left were the trail that I blazed. Clouds of drifting rubbles glide above buildings in the suburbs turning it into ravaging images served to me in a silver platter and devouring my thoughts into a stupor. The final raindrops ignite powerfully on my face. As I made my way up the road to a more habitable area, I saw the ubiquitous unfurling of the Malaysian flag telegraphing anguish and resolve; raised by the wreckage of WWII and all the old glories liberated by the wind and the building’s statues saluting as virtues of patriot. Weeds socialize across the cracking asphalt of every road. It was a city that will never falter by nature, yield with strength and fail to amuse. The tormented brown earth below me were ripped apart and secreted the acrid scent of a shattered soul piercing into the very recesses of my conscience. I came across a wretched hometown. There was a blunt adenoidal voice that emitted nothing but throbbing silence in between her disdaining and discontent words. They were pouring out of her mouth like a gushing current in the ocean; the notions of her being present was like indulging in false hopping because we both know that there isn’t any life

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