Catalonia Independence Is Bad Business

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At the beginning of O’Malley’s article, “We shouldn’t blindly support independence for Catalonia-here’s why”, O’Malley states that the scenes from Catalonia during the independence vote were “undeniably horrifying” and “Seeing…the Spanish state seize ballot boxes was an ugly sight” (O’Malley, James). These emotionally-loaded words suggest that the writer is trying to appeal to the reader’s emotions in an attempt to make them feel a certain way, in turn weakening his argument. Soon after that statement, he claims that “Following the awful scenes, everyone, it appeared, supported independence” (O’Malley, James). Here, O’Malley makes a bold generalization that everyone in Catalonia supported independence directly after the event, which is another …show more content…

One advocate of this view is Daniel Lacalle. He is a frequent contributor to such media as CNBC, Hedgeye, Wall Street Journal, El Español, A3 Media and 13TV. He has an international certificate of investment analyst CIIA and has a master's degree in Economic Research and IESE. In the article by Daniel Lacalle, “Catalonia Independence is Bad Business”, he has a firm stance towards the secession being negative and discusses the economical issues that may arise. Near the start of the article, he refers to the argument made by Catalan separatists and I took notice of him claiming “The economic figures show that Catalonia is suffering…from a bloated administration and unnecessary spending” (Lacalle, Daniel). Despite him stating that evidence supports the idea that Catalonia is suffering from a financial crisis, he does not list the actual proof by his claim or state where this evidence has come from, causing one to question the validity of the assertions that he makes. Another weakness of his argument appears when he interprets the words spoken by the Catalan government in a negative and one-sided way. As stated by them, “there would be no disruption for the financial community in the eventual scenario that Catalonia would become Independent as the Spanish Treasury would be the main creditor” (Lacalle, Daniel). Lacalle describes this statement as being read “…negatively any way one wants to look at it” (Lacalle, Daniel). By saying this, Lacalle disregards other viewpoints or interpretations of the statement, evoking a sense of close mindedness, weakening his argument. On the other hand, Lacalle’s article also has multiple strengths. For one, he has contributed towards multiple media outlets, suggesting that he has high credibility, and has graduated with a master’s degree in Economic Research, indicating that he is qualified to

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