After reading the version of Sappho’s hymn by Ann Carson, her version creates a more relatable and clearer view of the poem. The use and context of her words form create more of a realistic imagery. Reading the adaptation by Ann Carson’s, while the original version and other versions, which I read all improved the clarity of the poem. Carson’s version created more relatable visuals. I found her word selection in the beginning the first improvement, immediately in the first line. “Deathless Aphrodite”. Although the poem is about or to the goddess Aphrodite the verbiage is hard to translate. Especially if you are not a person who is familiar with that era of time it may become a challenging read. I have read various types of literature from that …show more content…
If she refuses gifts, rather will she give them.
If she does not love, soon she will love
Even unwilling. (Carson)”
The woman (she) will run from love, but she will also look or accept it from someone else. I did not have to read and reread that more than five times before I understood. Carson’s piece I found I could live through the words which she had written. Understanding what you’re reading and being able to relate is important. Regardless of what you are reading you should be able to comprehend.
In general, I understand that this was about wanting something more. Needing help, or wanting to give help to someone. A woman who lost at love, and her heart is hardening, but someone is asking don’t give up, not yet. This is what I could see clearly and understand. As for her use of words and imagery I could see the sparrows and them soaring. “Whipping their wings down the sky Through midair–(Carson)”
While poems of the past are valued, it is useless if you cannot understand or today the average reader may not relate. I appreciate the Sappho translation by Carson, although it is not in the simplest form it is a poem that can be read without becoming lost is trying to decipher what you are
A poem that I have been studying recently is Assisi by Norman McCaig, which I found very interesting to read because it made a statement which relates to our world today even though the poem was wrote about thirty or forty years ago. The poem has lots of ideas including effective figures of speech, good choice of words, important images and irony. The statement that McCaig makes is, where ever there is great wealth it always exists along side great poverty.
The entire poem is based on powerful metaphors used to discuss the emotions and feelings through each of the stages. For example, she states “The very bird/grown taller as he sings, steels/ his form straight up. Though he is captive (20-22).” These lines demonstrate the stage of adulthood and the daily challenges that a person is faced with. The allusions in the poem enrich the meaning of the poem and force the reader to become more familiar with all of the meaning hidden behind the words. For example, she uses words such as innocence, imprisonment and captive to capture the feelings experienced in each of the stages.
Her written words expresses the jumbled thoughts that raced through my mind the night I felt most vulnerable. Cars sped by on the dark streets as I wondered what life truly meant. I was so caught up in this fantasy of a perfect world and for a long time of period I believed all was well. But like all wonderful dreams, my world of happiness all came to an end when reality came knocking at my door just to rip my heart out. Reality gave me a check and left me with an emptiness that I did not know how to fill. I wondered where life was taking me and I questioned every detail just to find an answer as to what sort of path is life leading me down to. I became destructive as the answers I was looking for was never straightforward and this lead me down a spiral of despair. WIthout realizing it the first few times of reading Sexton’s poem, I was able to connect my past with her words and it brought a deeper meaning to
In romantic words, the poet expresses how much she thinks of love. She stated it was clear that she would not trade love for peace in times of anguish. Shift: after line 6 of the poem, there is a shift. In the beginning of the poem, the poet outlines the list of things that love cannot provide for the people who are willing to die. The narrator outlines the basic necessities like food, shelter, and health.
16W). The poet goes on further to discuss her own love for the woman Anactoria. In this single fragment, Sappho’s own individuality is displayed, that of her affection for Anactoria, as well as the function of her poetry to the context of the broader audience. In “Greek Lyric Overview,” Dr. Deborah Heller writes,
In the “Hymn to the Nile”the author loves and praises the Nile River. He believes that everyone praises or should praise the Nile, which the Ancient Egyptians believed to be controlled by the river Gods. The Nile is there life source, their water, and food supply, also there way of trade. The author may love the Nile, but that doesn't mean everyone does or even should. Let’s say I grocery shop at Walmart, but others may shop at Fry’s, Basha’s, Sprouts, Target. There are other options, everyone has their Nile river per say but it may not all be
These sets of lines express the frustrations of a mother who worked through a hard time, and is telling her son her story. She is telling her son this is the adversity she when through to become who she is today in spirit. ...
On the second stanza, the woman was haunted by the voices of her child in her mind. She said that under the circumstance she is right now, she has no choice but to have a abortion. Then she express her feeling and felt sorry about what she had done. “And your lives from your unfinished reach, If I stole your births and your names, Your straight baby tears and your games” (Gwendolyn Brooks) she show remorse that she stolen her child life and her child would get to experience the first tear and games. So now her baby already going through death.
Can a simple emotion such as love be regarded as one of the greatest weapons to create or attain power? It’s a renowned fact that human beings are by nature designed to need, crave, and even require love as part of their survival mechanisms. It comes to no surprise that one of the first accounts of antique poetry maintains love and the craving for it as its main theme; thereby, reinforcing the deep importance that it upholds in the lives of many individuals. Sappho’s “Deathless Aphrodite” clearly epitomizes the suffering and bitterness that arises from an unrequited love. In Sappho’s case, which portrays the case of many, she constantly finds herself in loneliness and despair for though she tries repeatedly, she is only let down recurrently as no one reciprocates the love she gives. It is only the Greek goddess Aphrodite, who holds
The first poem I think you should consider in adding to your list of poems is “For the Fire”, this poem was about the time I went in to the forest to get some lumber, and during my time there I noticed some of natures creations around me, like the kookaburra and wind that swerved in and out of the trees etc.
The poet tries to appreciate the people, who are always present when their friends and family are in need. She says that when people are in need of help, and/or suffering, all one needs to do is stick by their side, to give them courage to overcome their troubles.
The final stanza creates a vivid picture in your mind when read. If you can imagine anything that has to do with winning, or a victory of some kind, you can see what she is speaking about. For example, if someone was in a race, it would be better to see the winner cross the finish line, and know you almost made it; than to be so far behind that you had no chance of winning.
Her tone in this song is at first mellow, but when she comes to the stanza of this song, she deliberately raises her voice to emphasize her genuine feelings. The tone describes her want and need for her thoughts to be truly heard. She wants the listener to capture her essence and the view of herself. In this specific stanza, she explains that s...
Besides prose, the translation of poetry is another more difficult and challenging tasks for every translator. As Robert Frost’s puts it “Poetry is what gets lost in translation”, we can say, that this statement could be considered as a truthful one to a certain extent because there is no one-to-one equivalent when comparing two languages. Even if the translators possess a profound knowledge in the source language they would not be able to create a replica of the original
a poem which has a real meaning that is obvious to people and can help