Importance Of Unhealthy Relationships In Maggie Mitchell's Pretty Is Carly May

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Throughout Maggie Mitchell’s novel Pretty Is Carly May and Lois repeatedly hold Zed as an Idol that could never do wrong and no one could be better than him. This causes both Carly May and Lois to have unhealthy relationships throughout their adulthood. For example Lois cannot respond to the feeling Brad, a colleague at the school, shows toward her. Making the relation, they have strained. In addition, Chloe unable to keep a relationship with any male including her father runs away from the situation refusing to confront it. The strain becomes so bad between her and her father that she leaves home and never contacts him again. The pull Zed has also causes them both to have high praise for anything that Zed said. An example of this can be seen …show more content…

At the very end of the novel, both girls reflect on Zed. Lois refers back to him unlike she has before, criticizing him, by saying, “He was quite selfish in a way”, where Chloe retorts “’Yeah’…‘just a little selfish. He never meant to break our hearts’” (Mitchell 304). This tells us that the girls had actually fallen in love with Zed. Due to this attraction both girls had towards him at such a young age when the bond broke, when he dies, both girls hearts are shatter unable to form whole again keeping them from having stable relationships with other men. When a man comes into Chloe’s life, she begins to compare both his mannerisms and face to Zed. When Chloe goes out to eat with the writer, Stephen, she begins to imagine Zed sitting across from her. She says, “I even let myself imagine that I see a hint of Zed in his face” (Mitchell 85), once he begins to criticize the book that Lois wrote about them and Zed “The hint of Zed vanishes” (Mitchell 86). Chloe wanted to see Zed in him, but once Stephen began to criticize, her life with Zed she begins to despise him and Zed’s present disappears. Likewise, Lois became the same way toward Brad. Brad being the main man in Lois’ life after Zed she is unable to start a romantic relationship with him. She pushes …show more content…

Zed being a very charismatic man caused both Chloe and Lois to become attracted to him. This leads to the three of them creating a special bond early on. In the beginning of the novel Chloe describes her trusting of Zed being due to the way he looked at her, “As if he knew me perfectly, as if he could read my mind, as if I were the only person in the world who mattered. Doesn’t everyone want to be looked at that way?” (Mitchell 5). This shows how much his first impression left an impact on Chloe, how much she was attracted to him as soon as he picked her up. For a girl at her age to have a man look at her as if she is that important is almost magical, and very dangerous. For this small look to cause Chloe too, willingly get into his car shows how charismatic Zed was. After living with Zed for only a few months the two girls had become like a family. The three of them would read books, play games, and talk as if they were a real family. Then when they left Zed, both girls relationship with their real families fell apart due to that strong bond they had with Zed and each other. Not long after returning from Zed Chloe got into a fight with her brother nearly pocking his eye out. This causes her dad to kick her out and sending her to his mothers. Before long, she decided to leave the small town. Going for one

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