Thesis Statement For Slavery

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US History Final Essay Response- Slavery
(Topic Sentence) Over the course of American history, there were innumerable , but the most barbaric and inhumane event in this series was slavery. (Attention-Grabbing Strategy) Slavery influenced 20 decades of America, and split the nation apart; between those with morals, and those without. (Background Information). From the 1600s to the 1800s, slaves were ripped away from their families, and violently forced into bondage in the United States, where they were beaten, killed, and otherwise tortured if they did not work for white Americans. (Thesis Statement) Throughout the era of reform, the fight for the removal of slavery was the most significant reconstructions in American history
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(Evidence) “May 25,2015 (...) The lack of treatment for [mentally] ill inmates is inhumane and should not be allowed in a civilized society” “September 25, 2014 (...) women in the United States are paid only 77 cents for every dollar a man makes.” “U.S. prison inmates have been beaten with fists and batons, stomped on, kicked, shot, stunned with electronic devices, doused with chemical sprays, choked, and slammed face first onto concrete floors by the officers whose job it is to guard them”. (Elaboration)From these quotes, it is visible that the other reforms petitioned for during the time period of the Second Great Awakening (most notably the treatment of prisoners, the treatment of the mentally ill, and women’s rights) are still problems today, unlike slavery. Slavery/bondage is completely nonexistent in the United States today, while these other problems still exist. (Clincher) The other changes petitioned for during the Era of Reform have not made as much of a significant difference on America as the termination of slavery did. (Significance) This proves that the destruction of slavery was the most significant reform that was promoted during the time period of the Era of Reform. While there is no mistaking the fact that other reforms have made great progress, none of them are

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