The sentence structure and word order of this poem does a good job in channeling our feelings and helps to control what we think of this event. As we look closely to the third and final stanzas, we can find that the author created certain emphasis in the manipulation of the words as we probe for the meaning more thoughtfully. At first glance, these lines show that the boy seems to get hurt by the waltzing. But the last two line provides a clarification from the double meaning the poem represents so far. There is finally a unified resolution to the tension. The word “clinging” as the dancing winds down and the boy is being waltzed off to bed shows affection and love from the boy to his father by not wanting to let go of him. This creates …show more content…
In the poem, one can detect the opposing thought of sardonic and affection based on the poet 's choice of words. The dancing can also have multiple meaning. The two dance an easygoing rendering of the waltz. This is associated with fun, entertainment, play and making connections. But when the poet stated that “such waltzing can’t be easy,” it’s a direct conflict to it’s original meaning, and it possibly foreshadows the poet’s own eventual understanding of rhythm which leads to the intangible feelings associated with his devotion to his father. Upon closer examination this poem does not necessarily lends itself to clarity but created an unsettling meaning because the words seems to be at odds with each …show more content…
This brings about a misleading tone which can refer to a musical beating, but can remind one of a physical assault. The beat is aligned to the title of the poem as in keeping time in the waltz, but given the supposed family theme of the poem this word also shows how children learn about time from their parents in general like when to sleep, when to play, and when to dine. Or can this be a more deeper meaning of the limited time father and son share before the father pass away? After all there is this implication as the word “death” can be found in line 3. Another perspective to consider is that maybe the father is waltzing with alcoholism therefore there is the inevitability the father is dying and that the boy will be losing his father soon. So is this ultimately a poem of the narrator to commemorate his father? And if that is the case does it carry a dark meaning or a light meaning? Or maybe the meaning is just simply about a hardworking man who had a few drinks after a long day of working and just decided to dance and hangout with his son in order to relieve stress or have quality time with family. So many questions and implications could only mean one thing - that this poem serves more to confuse and confound than to clarify or deliver a message. It is more of a dance to obscurity where a reader can just go around and around in circles (as in waltzing) trying to capture the essence of this
It is a brand-new school year for St.Joseph High School. Everyone seems excited to see friends or to be engaged in the course they love. For me, I was very excited to be taking Math 31 with Mr.Abad being my course advisor. In the previous years, I was always fond of Mr.Abad’s teaching style because it always seemed to make sense for me.
However, neither the setting of the poem nor its events can be linked to the ballrooms where people dance waltz. The opening lines of the poem portray the narrator’s father as a drunken person “The whiskey on your breath/ Could make a small boy dizzy”. The dancer is anything but elegant, he doesn’t waltz gracefully but romps “until the pans/Slid from the kitchen shelf”. The poem is set in a family home, most likely in the kitchen. Thus, the narrator is trying to downplay the social connotati...
Despite the use of certain words such as “papa” and “waltz,” the overall connotation represented throughout the poem seems to concentrate more heavily on the negative aspects of the narrator’s memories. For these reasons, one can conclude that the poem aims to illuminate the immaturity and irresponsibility of the
My Papa’s Waltz presents a child’s telling of the waltz taking place between him and his father. As a verb, a waltz is “to move or walk in a lively and confident manner” (“Waltz”). The waltz described throughout the poem is quick and lively as the boy “hung on like death” (Roethke)
The father moves from side to side like waltzing, but in reality, I believe this is for his drunken condition. The child and the mother are dealing with his father’s alcoholism, which looks that the mother doesn’t care anymore about her family. I can easily perceive the child’s and the mother’s feelings and their unhappiness if instead of spending a great time with him, they are experiencing somehow abandon of the persons who supposed to be the strongest in their family and giving the best sample to them. “Then Waltzed me off to bed” (line 15) and “Still clinging to your shirt” (line 16) these two phrases are highly critical view of the fact that the child still sticks to his father no matter how dangerous his father is the child loves his “papa”. In addition, at the end the child’s hope is that his father changes one day and be with them as a real father unknowing that this is a perpetuated situation and transcending anger for
Stated in the first metaphor of the poem, “How do they do it, the ones who make love without love? Beautiful as dancers, gliding over each other like ice skaters” (lines 1-3) captures an image of two lovers gliding over one another like an abstract artistic painting in a simile. The cold atmosphere indicates the disdain detachment between the lovers during the experience. In modern society, many believe in the “no strings attached” method as part of a liberation for one’s self. Yet, Olds creates a paradox in the imagery by describing the people “red as steak, wine, wet as the children at birth whose mothers are going to five them away” (lines 6-8). In literal concept, the images display a child birth after an eventful sexual experience. When a child enters the world, it comes responsibility many young adults don’t care to handle, thus creating a narcissistic for the younger generation. Nevertheless, the syntax, form, and tone are broken down as Olds further answers her frustrations to society. A tonal shift reverted any ambiguities about these faceless sexual beings by describing them as “the ones who will not accept a false Messiah, love the priest instead of the God” (lines 15-16). Without the great
The poem being separated into two indicates change of direction. In the sestet, there is a sudden change in emotion. The first line, ‘the final hour’, immediately shows this. The father is now dying. Weak. ‘Your hands between the sheets’ indicates that the father is in a bed, suggesting restricted physical movement, unlike before. There is then a role reversal, as the son is lifting the fat...
The speaker compares the moment before a kiss to “syntax,” suggesting that, oftentimes, much thought goes into the forming of an emotion. He quickly juxtaposes this, however, against a relationship with nature. Immediately following this kiss, he remarks that this prior mentality has caused him “wholly to be a fool” (cummings 5). Throughout the middle of the poem, he compares the human body to the flourishing of the world. This is first introduced this in the second stanza, as he writes that “Spring is in the world” (6). This evokes imagery of life, of rebirth, of the sun rising to vanquish the cold winter behind us. The speaker goes on to speak of “kisses” from his lover, stating that “my blood approves,” in other words, races at the introduction of unreserved affection (7). If we analyze the symbolism in these lines, we can read them as the short narrative of a moment of enlightenment. The speaker, who has previously approached life in an analytical manner, has been suddenly inspired by the tenderness of a kiss. He realizes, in a flash of emotional impulse, that his prior lifestyle, his careful attention to “the syntax of things” has been dishonest (3).
This poem has a kept form. Even at a glance, it has a set form. It consists of four quatrains, each line being an iambic tritameter. The poem is about a young boy waltzing with his father. One can assume that the speaker is a young boy, or perhaps the poet reminiscing his youth. The father dances around in a haphazard manner, knocking over pans in the kitchen. Upon first glance, the tone is humorous. The picture one immediately forms is rather comical with the boy clinging on for dear life as his chuckling father spins him round and round, making a mess in the kitchen while the mother looks on discontentedly. However, the line, "whiskey on your breath could make a small boy dizzy" suggests the father's drunkedness and "at every step you missed my right ear scraped buckle" suggests the dance was not an altogether joyful one. Lines such as "hung on like death", and "beat time on my head" are might even lead the reader to think the father is abusive of the boy.
The poem "My Papa's Waltz" by Theodore Roethke's has a rhyme to it and repetition of words to illustrate a child's life. As well, the tone is happy and dark while talking about the child spending time with his father. The repetition of happy words is waltz and romped which shows his enjoyment with his father. The darkness that comes with the poem is he would get hurt in the interactions with him "The hand that held my wrist Was battered on one knuckle " even through this the child was happy to be with him. The four stanzas it has is not much but each line contains rhyme to keep the reader up on its toes.
Theodore Roethke’s poem “My Papa’s Waltz” describes an interaction between a boy and his father, presumably a memory of Roethke’s relationship with his own father. There is irony, where the title and the content of the poem massively differ in meaning, which makes the poem brilliant. The virtuosity of the writing comes from the diction, imagery, and irony Roethke uses to describe a seemingly sadistic relationship (and the physical abuse involved) between the father and son under the title of the most elegant of dance.
It is obvious this is an evening ritual, one that is cherished. The boy is aware of his fathers’ waltzing abilities and he concedes that he is up for the challenge. The irony of the statement, “I hung on like death” (Roethke line 3) is a private one, yet deeply describes his yearning for one more waltz with his father who passed away when Theodore was only fifteen years
In the poem “My Papa’s Waltz” by Theodore Roethke, connotative language is used to convey the poet’s attitude toward the “Waltz”. The emotions and associations attached to a word provide it with a connotative meaning; rather than the literal meaning, which is the denotation of a word. The waltz is known to be a graceful dance; but, the diction the poet uses to describe this event shows otherwise. First, the poet says how he “hung on” to his father; suggesting that he was fighting to continue their dance, rather than being able to do so effortlessly. In addition, it is also said that they “romped until the pans slid from the kitchen shelf”. The connotation behind the word romp implies a noisy and boisterous ruckus; the opposite of what
“My Papa’s Waltz” by Theodore Roethke is a poem that illustrates the love and bonding between a father and child through structure, figurative language, imagery, symbolism, and diction. The poem begins with lines making it seem negative, violent, and maybe even hate. However it was really his use of figurative language to show them bonding and having fun. In the first quatrain it says the father has whiskey breath, enough to make a child dizzy, so the child hangs on like “death”, because it was hard for him to waltz. At a first glance this may seem negative because of the whiskey and the author's choice of words like death. Although it is not negative. The father may have had a whiskey breath but it doesn't state he was drunk, and him hanging on like death may sound horrific, but he has to hold on to him so he is inescapable as death because it is
Because there are many ways to write poetry, there is no such thing as a ‘good’ or ‘bad’ poem. Poetry is a form of expression, its’ finished product is like a piece of artwork thats’ picture is painted with words of choice. A poem can be written in any style or form- a rant, a letter, a story or a song; but what makes a poem, a poem? No matter what type of writing style is used, the poem must include a theme; the purpose of the poem or the message that the author tries conveying to teach us a lesson about life, and a subject; the overall topic or ideas that are incorporated in the text. Although typical one-stanza poems may not consist of much detail, they give a straightforward message which makes it strong enough to stand alone.