The Valedictorian System In Margaret Talbot Best In Class

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Margaret Talbot, the writer of “Best In Class”, describes how the valedictorian system isn’t an accurate representation to reward students for their achievements through her use of logos and diction.
Throughout her writing Talbot uses logical reasoning to thoroughly analyze the ideas and conflicts presented in having valedictorians. She does this by having multiple examples where the main idea was involved in some way. This can range from multiple law-suits and student testimonies on not being named valedictorian to a principal's view on the situation. Most notably the opening and main story used about Sarasota High School and the tensions that arose from having a valedictorian one year. With that comes the after stories of where students ended up and how the parents felt, even how the community and school felt. Such as when Talbot said, “Some teachers considered boycotting graduation; students talked about booing Davies when he walked onstage” (224). All of this is used by Talbot to create first a background to the topic, and from that, use other …show more content…

Talbot uses powerful diction to get her message across in ways which normal writing and syntax could not achieve. Examples range from “...sneaky way of gaming the system” (223) and “...criticized as palaces of privilege” (229) and “...the contest for valedictorian offers a pleasing image of a purer meritocracy” (231). All of these following examples of powerful language depict to the reader the importance of the topic and to stress the author’s message. The rhetoric adds to stress certain points which are very critical in her message. Without the strong dialect the message could be weakened and even worse in the end it could be depicted wrong. On top of all the syntax and diction along with the rhetorical appeals brings the reader to the author’s overall message of needing to reward the best in a different way than normal but making sure that we still do reward

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