The Boastful and Cocky Girl

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Winning was always a must for me, it wasn’t that I needed to better but that I had to be better. But sometimes, I’m about to achieve something extraordinary and then I fail. (MC)(Round)
When I was in dance class, I told all my friends,especially Karma(flat), that I had the dance memorized and that I was the best. In the end, I froze and forgot everything.(H)(I2) All the girls laughed, everyone except for Karma who was just disappointed at me and said,“It’s alright don’t mind them.”
But she didn’t actually caring because on the inside she was just happy that her performance was the best. From that day onwards, I vowed my revenge on her for showing me false pity.
[When summer rolled in(P), my family was packing for a camping trip and I was super excited so I called Karma.
“Hello?” she answered.
“Hey Karma it’s Yangtso, guess what?” I asked
“What?” she asked.
“I’m going camping tomorrow and I can’t wait,” I exclaimed.
“Really? I went camping last week and my family and I had bike races. I won them all and at the end I was allowed to ride an adult bike down a super steep hill. It was super fun, have you rode on an adult bike before?” she asked.
“No but my uncle said I could ride his when we go camping and there probably will be a super steep hill there too,” I lied.
“That sounds nice but aren’t you afraid of heights? It’s best not to-”
“Are you kidding me? I am not afraid of heights, and I so will go down that hill. Oh and during the bike races that we are going to have, I’m going to win them all,”
“Okay then, have fun,” she said.
“Don’t worry, I will,” I cut and hung up.
I felt awful and I didn’t like my attitude. Karma is my best friend and I have been holding a pointless grudge over her but since I already told her th...

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...ow disappointed my uncle was and I realized that I was a chicken. (M) I was both a bird that can’t fly and a human that is too scared to face reality. I knew I couldn’t ride down that hill and I knew that stealing was wrong yet I was too scared to stop myself and did it anyway.
I spent the rest of the trip watching the other kids play and when I returned, my friends swarmed me asking what had happened. When I told them, they all laughed at me, everyone expect Karma. I didn’t look Karma in the eyes but when I did I felt like crying because she was my true friend. She didn’t criticise me nor make fun of me at all, instead she empathized with me and forgave me. That summer I learned who my real true friend was and not to be so blind and aimlessly charge into stupid causes.

Theme: A true friend is someone who sticks around and supports even if the whole world doesn’t.

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