Persuasive Essay: Improving DPS Schools

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Improving DPS Schools Education is essential, yet, it seems the thirst the leaders of tomorrow have for knowledge will never be quenched. Thanks to the media, the true colors of DPS have illuminated. It's outrageous how inadequate the conditions truly are. These schools in Detroit are filled with safety hazards, outdated material, and overcrowded classes. That is no place for learning, that is a place where misconduct abounds. Schools in Detroit will only improve if the class sizes are reduced, the material is updated and if students have a fear of failing. Surely, a class of 50 students is the same as having a class of 25 students, right? Wrong. “There are just so many kids in my class now, It’s ridiculous. We have two teachers, and yet everyone still seems lost,” said a concerned 11th grader who attends a public high school in Detroit. This is the …show more content…

But, in this day and age students act as if it's impossible. DPS fail to inform their students that failing is a real thing and it can happen to anyone. Students assume that if they put in little effort, and come to class they’ll pass. They don’t consider their actions, assignments, and homework. Students are oblivious to the fact that failing could make or break them. If DPS schools wanted to see a drastic increase in their students academics and a decrease in summer school attendees, they would threaten their students with failing. It sounds cruel, but it works. Failure motivates us to push ourselves until we are at where we want to be. I know first hand, I received my first “D” during my sophomore in my geometry class. I refused to let that get me down, and worked until I brought my grade up to an “A”. I didn’t let anything stand in my way, looking at that horrendous grade only made me want to try harder. If DPS were open about failing and how to prevent failing, their students would be very

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