Maria Toorpakai Research Paper

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Maria Toorpakai, a young woman from Pakistan, grew up as a young man to prevent herself from being mistreated. Only four years of age, she had tossed and burned her girly youth clothes, and introduced herself to some of her brothers clothing. Maria is 25 years old, and is preparing and occupying in canada as one of the top 50 squash players internationally. Maria comes from a family of “freethinkers”, her dad is an advocate for women’s rights, her sister believes one day she will be a member of the National Assembly of Pakistan, and her mom found a school for girls and promotes education. These “freethinkers” have had problems with their views not matching their neighbors, this caused maria to learn to use a gun. Known as Genghis Khan, Maria …show more content…

Fenton says this by telling Maria Toorpakai’s Journey of being a disguised young boy, and all the views that were among them in Pakistan. This is reliable, because Fenton has obviously recently went to canada to see Maria or has called her because she said “ now 25 “ which shows present tense, Fenton also is reliable by date she has wrote this early this morning, maybe for memory reference.One of Fenton’s best arguments was when she announced Maria’s age when she first decided to change her gender. This is a good argument because it shows how desperate women were to be equal or just be free.This author is a good writer the entire article made complete sense to me it. I think it might be because this reflects the things I’ve been learning in school. This article appeals to my logical appeal. I think that the entire article uses connotative language because it tells Maria’s story without actually saying why it is important.Fenton’s attitude toward the subject is probably, more focused on a woman's point of view toward unequal living.The author is bias seeing how she is also a female who has heard and maybe even experience mistreatment.She adequately supports her claim with appropriate evidence using statements said by maria and making a short film on her. Fenton’s resources are not really that

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