How To Write A Thesis Statement For Birth Control Essay

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First of I just want to take this time to congratulate you on meeting the requirement of the paper, it was an honor to read about your topic on Birth Control. From reading the paper I can honestly see the hard work you put into it. While reading your paper I notice the use of standard vocabulary words, I found this to be a great idea, in my view it help to persuade readers on the level of text they’re reading, but in other words the paper is not graded on how much vocabulary words you can come up with, I’m not saying using standard vocabulary is a horrible thing but instead focusing your paper on vocabulary words that might get your reader confused and have them searching the web for definition, I honestly advice since this is a argumentative …show more content…

There are many things missing in this paper, first of you start your paper with this quoting “(Everyone at one point has said the words “It’s my body, I can do whatever I want to it if it’s not affecting others)” I don’t know if you support that idea but in my view I found it very wrong, in other words people can say is my body I can decide not to take a shower for the rest of my life on Earth, I decide not to brush my teeth, I decide to take a gun to class and if anyone piss me of i can shoot them, the problem over here is if we all decide to do whatever I don’t think we will live in a peaceful nation anymore, and the question is How do you know is not affecting others around you? The writer can best convince me of why they support the idea of birth control, the writer making it seem as if Birth Control is the only method to prevent pregnancy is not there are many other ways to prevent

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