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Is everyone in this world not aiming for a good job? Human beings start their life by learning how to walk and talk, and then the next stage of their life is getting education which is a long path. In the end their aim is a good job with a good financial security, and of course everyone has to try their best in their jobs. For example a mother’s job is to discipline her children, and much more which cannot be explained in one essay and of course she would want her children to prosper and become accomplished in their lives and be happy, that is why she tries her best in her job. A pilot who flies a plane with hundreds of humans in it and has to finish their job in the best way they can, to ensure the safety of his passengers. And doctors who treat thousands of people and has many people’s lives under their hands, that is why they have to be careful not to mar. Both Hag Ali’s and Mayfield’s articles had personal stories that conveyed their belief but Mayfield’s article was more organized and more appealing, it had an outstanding personal story that really attracts readers to it and she even stated how she was impacted by her belief which was not available in Hag Ali’s article.

In the first article Jobs Taken for Granted which was written by Mohamed Hag Ali, He uses two personal stories to convey his belief. In the first story he explains how hard it is to find a job, and how people struggle to find it using his own personal experience and he then added “it’s not that easy to find a job and people should start appreciating their jobs and stop taking them for granted.” (Hag Ali, 2013, Para. 3). In his second story he explains how customers treat the staff members of small jobs showing their ill manners. Hag Ali stated that, “[Some cu...

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To be brief, Hag Ali’s essay was decent with many persuasive strategies that supported his belief but the fact that he did not state how he got impacted by his belief or his personal experience lowered the strength of his essay. While in Mayfield’s essay she used outstanding persuasive strategies with vivid imagery and descriptive words which made it fascinating and aided in supporting her belief.

In conclusion, during the great recession a wave of great depression was caused and a huge factor of that depression is unemployment and job dissatisfaction, reading those two articles it helps in appreciating any job you get, showing that taking pride and working hard in a job will keep you satisfied. I never knew that people would get proud working in jobs like a maid and it is fascinating the level and extent of dedication they have toward their jobs.

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