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Imagine this, two football teams are playing in the high school championship. The Greeks, and the Trojans. (very original) These two teams have a very strong rivalry, because the Trojans took the Greeks mascot. The game begins, and after 10 minutes nobody has scored. The Greeks best player on defense, Achilles, has decided to not play because of his personal issues with the head coach. Now the Greeks defense sucks and the Trojan offense, lead by the famous quarterback Hector, is about to score on them. So Patroclus, who is Achilles best friend asks him if he can put on Achilles pads to scare the Trojans and defend them from the touchdown. Achilles says “But you're injured.” And then Patroclus says “I’ll be fine I won’t play long just enough to get us the lead in the game. So Patroclus goes in the game, and the Trojans are terrified at seeing this sight. The Trojans get sacked twice in a row, and now it is 3rd down and 22. Patroclus has done what he needed to do to get the team back in the lead. He can go, but he decides to stay and keep playing. The Trojans are sacked again, but they decided to go for it on 4th down because they realize that it isn’t Achilles is in the pads, but Patroclus. Then on 4th down Hector decides to run with the ball, Patroclus goes for the tackle, but gets destroyed by Hector and a few of his blockers. Patroclus tears his ACL and breaks his neck which causes him to stay on a wheel chair for the rest of his life. Achilles gets ticked and throws on his football pads and goes on the field even though the game has taken a break, and tackles Hector which knocks Hector out since he isn’t wearing his helmet. Everyone one is shocked, and they get even more shocked when Achilles drags Hector around the football fi...

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...ook on some of the Greeks peer pressure to stay and fight. If he did, then once again he is unwise to stick to his gut and even think about what he was doing. If Achilles returned home, he could’ve raised his sons, ruled as the king of the Myrmidons, and lived a very love fulfilled life. But he chose heart over head, and ultimately gave up his future unwisely. This is my last reason of why Achilles was unhonorable, and unwise to stay and fight in Troy after Patroclus’s death.
Because of these three reasons, 1. He was very unhonorable with the way he dealt with Hector 2. He unwisely did not stop and think about the situation. 3. He unwisely never thought about how his decision to stay would affect his future. These are the reasons why I think Achilles was unhonorable, and unwise to stay and fight in Troy after Patroclus’s death.

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