Egrets Commentary

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Mary Oliver?s poem, ?Egrets?, frantically runs the reader through a labyrinth of feeling, imagery, and uncertainty. Dragging the reader beyond Oliver?s dirt path, through the hostile environment of a jungle, then to a great pond occupied by majestic egrets. The background of the speaker is unknown, the moment in time can not be truly determined because egrets live in tropical climates and the environment described in the poem can not distinguish the exact area which the poem is taking place, thus, the moment in time which this poem takes place can not be determined. The speaker, possibly an adventurer, is running through some sort of forest off of the path set to their impending doom within the jungle. By the means of imagery, questions of the significance of fire, light, and dark have risen from this poem, rushing the reader through the forest to then admire the pond and egrets, Oliver?s poem leaves the reader in question of the difference between faith and logic.

The poem is structured to the templet of three main sections. The first section, lines one through thirteen, discusses the physical and mental anguish of life while living in a chaotic environment. The speaker says that ?the path closed down and over?, suggesting that there is nothing to follow forward nor is there something to follow back, implying that ambiguity and uncertainty is the mind set of the poem. Never stopping, the speaker moves ?through scumbled leaves, fallen branches... knotted catbrier? and ?thorns?, these inevitable pains and hardships which the speaker encounters during his or her journey into the beyond. This section elevates at the point where ?the mosquitoes smelled? the speaker, increasing the sense of danger by the use of paranoia of mosquitoes ?wheeling and whining? toward the speaker.

In the second section, lines fourteen to twenty-four, the speaker seems to reach her destination and with the use of metaphors describes what she sees. The speaker describes the pond as ?black and empty?, all that can be seen is a bundle of reeds. But to the speakers surprise, this pond was not as empty and lifeless as she had thought, the reeds were actually a small group of egrets, three to be exact.

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