Clash with the Hurricane- Personal Narrative

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Clash with the Hurricane- Personal Narrative

The sky darkened from the blue light sky, it turned suddenly to a dark

black gloomy sky hovering with a mist cloud. I walked back into the

car, seemingly it was going to pour down. Heavily, the wind blew. I

turned to shut the windows, but, as I looked closer out of the window,

huge clouds started fusing together which then created a huge immense

hurricane. I could not believe my eyes, a hurricane was coming our

way. I could not believe it, even though this was so dangerous and

could have many damaging effects to the environment and to the people,

but from a distance it was such a magnificent phenomenon. Heavily rain

poured, hitting the ground like bullets from a gun. Luckily for me, I

was in my car.

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I tried to start the car but it wouldn’t work. I turned my head again

towards the window, the death trap was seemingly getting even more

closer. After many efforts of trying to start the car, the car would

still now

move.

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‘What a time for the car not to work I thought to myself’. I got out

of the car and looked ahead. The treacherous whirlwind was closer than

ever, people now started to notice and started fearing. At this point

I was thinking only one thing, ‘Those damn weather reporters never

told us that a hurricane was coming our way!’

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‘The trees wavered like a stand full of supporters at a football

match’ here he uses a metaphor/similes . Here he compares the trees to

supporters at a football match. He does this probably

sarcastically.

“Heavily, rained poured, hitting the

ground like bullets from a gun”. Here again he uses metaphor/similes.

He describes the rain falling to bullets from a gun he does this so he

can show how fast a painful the rain is falling on to the people and

to the environment. He also again uses the word ‘heavily’ first. He

does this so he can get his message through quickly and also so he

can show the importance of the

weather.

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