Batter My Heart Tone

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On the first read Batter My Heart appears to be about a complicated love triangle, but with multiple readings, a deeper meaning becomes more obvious, it’s a personal appeal to God. In the poem the speaker asking to be broken and rebuilt again, because despite their intense love for the other person, they are unfortunately promised to another; their love’s enemy. They ask to either be cut off completely or to be taken in and imprisoned. The tone of the speaker’s voice is very intense, reflecting in the words they use such as, “overthrow me”, “Your force”, “imprison”, “ravish”. There is also a desperate pleading tone because the speaker is repeatedly asking for physical action, or punishments almost, to be taken against them. He or she wants …show more content…

In the very first line where it states, “Batter my heart, three-person’d God”, the first image that comes to mind is one of three figures of the same person hitting someone in the chest to batter their heart. A few lines down the poem continues, “and bend Your force to break”, one can see someone forcing an item back and forth repeatedly until it begins to crack and finally breaks. The line where the speaker says, “But I am betrothed unto your enemy”, the picture created is one of an unwilling bride standing next to her fiancé. There are lots of pictures presented in this poem with the use of simple and yet descriptive …show more content…

Again starting with the first two lines of the poem, the speaker is asking to be battered, however they go on to say that God is not one who physically hurts but instead He, “knocks”, “breathes”, and “shines”, those actions are the opposite of what the speaker wants done to him. He also goes on and compares himself to a town that has been overthrown or seized by an enemy: “I, like an usurped town to another due.” There is a metaphor that is not obvious at first but after slowly re-reading it, it reveals itself. He speaks of Reason being a captive, which is impossible because reason is an idea not a physical thing that can be kept in a prison and chained. A second metaphor that is not obvious is the one of the speaker being “betrothed unto Your enemy”, this is also impossible because the enemy of God is

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