This is what happens when I have all these ideas but they are all jumbled up. So, when I actually type out my story, it becomes so messy. Warning, do not read if you cannot stand such messy compositions. - “You know, even when I am old and wrinkly - even when I start to forget things and misplace my things - I will always love you,” Bethany whispers into Anthony’s ears. Anthony turns to face Bethany. It has always amazes Anthony how he had managed to find a girl like her. She is absolutely beautiful to him. Her blonde hair spilling in golden waves over her shoulders, reaching just slightly above her waist. Her natural pink lips always curling into a smile. Her hazel eyes sparkling with joy each time she talks to him animatedly. He loves her. Oh, he really does. “Do you want to know why?” Bethany asks while intertwining her fingers with his. “Why?” Anthony breathes out. "The mind forgets, but the heart does not." There she goes again, staring into blank space. That had to be the fourth time Anthony noticed her spacing out beside him while he does his sketching. It had not been the first time she did that either. For the past few days, Bethany Weston would just be sitting down while looking ahead of her. Except, she is not exactly looking at anything. She would zone out and then after a while, come back to reality. When that happens, she would appear confused for a moment, as though wondering where she was or why was she here, before actually coming to her senses. No doubt, Anthony did feel a little weird about the whole thing at first. Bethany is not one to daydream so easily. However, Anthony just takes it as Bethany being tired from the hours of baking, completing her customers’ orders.... ... middle of paper ... ... “Stay, stay. Don’t leave. Don’t ever leave,” Anthony murmurs against her lips. They are so close, salty tears mixing together. But they do not care. // "Will you leave?" Bethany answers with a faint smile, "I wouldn't dare." "Have you ever thought of leaving?" "Yes, many times." "We will get help for you. I promise." // Anthony fulfilled his promise and Bethany got the help she needed. She never got better, it is not possible anyway. But it does not matter, because when she forgets, he will remember for her. What matters is that, even through it all, the heart is the one that never wavers. --- A/N: I'm not exactly satisfied with the ending (in fact I thought it was horrible) but, honestly, I didn't know how to end it. Nevertheless, thank you for giving this a chance and reading it!
In my eyes I loved the book I rate it a 9/10, its had a good twist and turn to it. I loved this
This book was brilliant. There were moments that made me laugh, moments that made me tremble in my chair, moments that made me cry, moments that melted my heart, and moments that made me want to rip my hair out at the roots. This book has it all, and it delivers it through a cold but much needed message.
conclusion will include the end of the story that i stated at the beginning and sum up what I overall thought of the story and the parts I analyzed.
story, the plot was good. The liked the purpose of the author and the way
The ending of the novel was inspiring. The author suggests the reader to look into great novels, and even supplies a list of novels a personally suggests. He ended with a very ...
This is how you train your unconscienced to kick in creatively.” (Lamott 96) This is overall good advice for most. Some or all of us get distracted by many things chores, life, kids, work, cat that won’t stop meowing even a simple list that Lammot states is “Nurse Ratchet like listing of things that must be done right this moment” (96). The author says that we need to ignore all distractions no matter how much our brain may scream at us to get the other work done or something bad will happen we must persevere to finish or at least start the paper. Or else it will never get done and you will be putting together a Frankenstein like paper at two in the morning.
I would recommend this story to anyone who enjoys stories centered on the maturation of youth during their teenage years. I felt that the climax of this story was not as exciting as it could have been. However, the storyline was very interesting as well as entertaining. I look forward to reading other stories by this author!
I think my favorite thing about this novel was the realistic ending. Some books try to just give you a fairy tale but this book had an ending that mad you think in the end if I was in the same position would I do the same thing. I didn’t like the fact that the novel portrayed mental illness in a way to say that it needed to be hidden and protected. I thought this novel was very believable for the time period that it was set in. I think the ending to this novel was perfect it was an accurate ending to this
that the heart of love is as profound, deep and moving as the ocean itself. The gem
The ending of this book was a cliffhanger. In my opinion that is the worse kind of ending, but that’s how that writing persuades the reader to get the next book in the series. Without giving too much away about the end of the story, it was very unexpected. To be
...e not left with much of an ending, but we can only hope as readers that this will progress the narrator forward in his life.
I did not like the ending of the story. I found that the ending was very predictable and anticlimactic, especially when all the tension was being built up throughout the rest of the book. When I was nearing the end of the book I was already starting to envision the ending of the book and when I got to the end I was disappointed to see that I was correct. I would have preferred if the ending was more of a cliff-hanger and ended completely different than anyone would have expected.
“I know for certain that we never lose the people we love, even to death. They continue to participate in every act, thought and decision we make. Their love leaves an indelible imprint in our memories. We find comfort in knowing that our lives have been enriched by having shared their love.” (Buscaglia, 2013)
The main reason why I have so much trouble when writing, is because I don't concentrate
"All I want is for you to know me again, for me to be in your life. And, even if it can't happen right now, I would just like to know you heard my plea. I would just like to know that I'm not blocked from your memory."