Writing in the Style of Philip Larkin

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Lights. Sirens. Action.

As quick as a heartbeat, we race to the van, hearts rushing, always not knowing what to expect, never fully prepared for death. Speeding through traffic, seeing familiar streets where we have saved lives before. My heart is pumping hot blood through my veins. I can feel it pulsing in my neck and in my ears. I’m sweating as my mind tries to prepare for the possible death creeping closer and closer by the second. We turn corners at break neck speed our sirens screaming out to the world.

I look out of the windscreen and see children strewn on steps and playing on the roads. Mothers coming out of shops. I smell fish and chips and roasting meats as we rush past the market.

Closer.

Closer.

Death is just around the corner. We come screeching to a halt. Before the vehicle stops my door is open and I am running towards the back doors. A woman sobs hysterically and comes rushing over. Panic. Panic. ‘Help him’ she screams. We ignore her as my partner and I grab our medical kits, a defribulator and the stretcher. The woman still sobbing ushers us inside. I can feel death its cold hands reaching out to me. Screaming in my head. Laughing at me. I shiver.

We race into the living room. A man lies half dead on the floor, his body in meltdown. His fingers and toes curled, his eyes loll back in his head. Quick shivers run over his body. ‘Help him’ the woman cries again.

“How long has he been having this seizure?” my partner asks the woman. I notice a mug shattered on the floor. Death is close. ‘I don’t know, I was cooking in the kitchen and I heard the mug smash so I came in…and…and…he was like this, Please help him!’ She wails on and on, we ignore her and roll the man onto the stretcher.

Death is comin...

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... convey his ideas. For example; the imagery of colour. The red/white of the blankets shows stark contrast. These colours may represent blood and the sterility of the ambulance. The imagery of children "strewn" may indicate the randomness of death .

In my story I was trying to show a fear of death. A man has a seizure and the paramedics go to save him. They are scared of death. Perhaps this is why they are paramedics? To cheat death? Save lives? I always imagine death as a black figure, male and always cool, calm and collected. This instils even more fear into the paramedics.

Death can be anywhere. We can be expecting it or it can catch us unawares but we all share one thing in common. Death.

"Ambulances" is simply another means through which Larkin can muse on one of his favourite subjects - death; and as usual, he does so with stunning brilliance and mystery.

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