The Stars My Destination By Alfred Bester

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The text I choose to discuss was the seminal work of Alfred Bester, The Stars My Destination, a book that went on to define science fiction and spawn the cyberpunk genre. The story follows the life of Gulliver Foyle, a generic worker with no ambitions, no friends, no semblance of a personality. After an attack destroys the ship he was working on, the NOMAD, Gully is forced to survive by living in an airtight locker the size of a coffin for six months. On the one hundredth and seventy first day, Gully sees the cargo ship VORGA fly close by and he sends out a distress beacon. The VORGA sees the beacon, yet decides to pass him by regardless. Fury and hatred for the ship consumes Gully and he becomes reborn as man with a single goal, find and …show more content…

The aesthetic and structural choices Bester took work so effectively to convey anger. Personally, I have always believed that books also have a visual aspect to them, as the image of the words themselves get burned into the mind sometimes, rather than the things portrayed by those words. The short, brutish sentences in the last paragraph create an image of his anger more effectively than the words themselves. Bester’s contrast of this rough section with the opening lines of the excerpt, which are smooth, long and complex, serve to illustrate the difference between “us” and “him”. Since the novel is in the third person, the narrator is someone removed from the story, behaving as someone watching the events unfold as the readers are. By contrasting the narrator/readers smooth sentences with Gully’s violent and torn sentences separates us from Gully and let’s us view him as we would an animal at a zoo or a phenomenon. Bester achieved this through sentence structure alone, without even relying on …show more content…

Bester’s writing style is one I’ve attempted to emulate in my own creative writing, one that stresses longer sentences heavy with carefully picked words. Words describing Gully, “slow”, “empty”, “lazy”, “brute”, ‘sluggish”, come rapid fire, one after another, pushing this idea of the most generic, boring main character to ever grace the page. Just as he had done with structure, Bester again separates the reader from Gully. The narrator uses complex words and a much more elevated vocabulary when describing what’s around Gully, but Gully himself speaks “gutter talk”, a dialect in the novel reserved for the lowest levels of society. The message Bester sends is clear. In every conceivable way, Gully Foyle is low-brow trash, and as he is mentioned several times to be a “common man”, the general population is also low-brow trash. Bester effectively and strongly infused this section with social commentary subtext without even having to build a world or a setting. He created social commentary out of a single person, isolated in

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