Personal Narrative-Sacrifice Or Murderer?

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“Have a great day at work!” Michele proclaimed as I walked out of the front door and felt the brisk air as it blew onto my skin. I remember the sound of birds chirping as I made my way to my car. I started my car and begin listening to Queen as I began my commute. I pull up to my spot in the parking garage and walk to my office. Many people stopped and said,”Hello!” on my journey. As I sat down at my desk, the telephone began to ring. “Hello?” I questioned. “Hello. This is officer Devin Combs. Am I speaking to detective Michael Dryden?” “Yes, you are. Has something happened?” “There has been a murder in an alley near Columbus and Roosevelt. We need you here as soon as possible.” “I’m on my way.” I arrived at the scene and searched for the officer in charge to find out any information about this crime. I finally succeeded and approached him. …show more content…

“We don’t know much, but I’ll tell you what we do know so far. The victim is 22 year-old Brandon McNeely, a student at the nearby university. It looks like he was walking home from the local bar and used the alley as a shortcut. That’s when he was shot by an unknown person. His body was discovered at 6:30 this morning and we believe that he died around 3:00. The forensics report says that he was shot with a 9 millimeter hollow point bullet with 115 grain powder. The bullet passed through his sternum and into his heart. He died

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