Outline For Organ Donation Essay

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Introduction Statement: Before I begin, I would like to ask how many of you are listed as organ donors? According to Organ Donation Statistics, there were 33,611 surgical transplants performed in 2016 and there are over 116,000 individuals as of August 2017 placed on the national transplant waiting list. II. Connect with Audience: Suppose in the event of an accident that you or a loved one are left in critical condition and are in need of a new organ; you will now be placed on a national waiting list. However, suppose there is a shortage in donations? Life’s too short. Randal Miller, my neighbor and good friend, was diagnosed with kidney disease sometime in early 2009. As a result, he was required to be linked to a dialysis machine every night …show more content…

(Visualization): More lives can be saved Transition: The first concern to be addressed is the steep increase in demand for organ donors. Need: (What is the problem?) I. a. Claim 1: There are not enough donors. i. According to Organ Donation Statistics website, approximately every ten minutes, another person is added to the waiting list while 20 people die daily waiting for a transplant. b. Claim 2: The ratio of currently available donors to those in need is incredibly high. i. 95% have claimed they are in support of donating, however, 54% are actually listed as donors as listed in the Organ Donation Statistics website. Transition: One possible contributing factor for the lack of donors could simply be that people are unaware of how to become a donor. Satisfaction: (What is the solution?) II. a. Claim 1: There is a sum total of 11 organs within the human body that possess the ability to be successfully transplanted. i. Donate Life America website states, “Deceased organ, eye or tissue donation is the process of giving an organ (or a part of an organ), eye, or tissue at the time of the donor’s death, for the purpose of transplantation to another person. At the end of your life, you can give life to others.” b. Claim 2: Become a

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