Iliana Roman First Job Thesis

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When nothing is going right in life, what do you do? Do you just quit and hope for the best or do you pick yourself up and work even harder to succeed. Have you ever felt hopeless and full of despair in life? Iliana Roman, a single mother of three children and a owner of a hair salon, kindles the message that individuals who face adversity can still persevere in life and it is never too late, she conveys this through her memoir “First Job.” At seventeen years old Roman became pregnant on accident. This lead to her life to do a complete one eighty degrees, leading her dropped out of high school. She was at the point of no return, she simply could not hold down a proper job, the only way to support herself and her child is working three to four …show more content…

Through repetition Roman emphasized her desire to become better,“I want my children to see what I saw in my father: work, work, work. I want to b my kids’ idol” (820). By including repetition, she lets her audience understand the significance of putting in hard work and doing everything to the best of your abilities to better yourself. Roman declared, “I wanted to work there, but I wanted the education more. I didn't want to stay there forever, there’s more in the world than just one place” (816). For humans, there is nothing more comfortable than routine. Roman wanted her audience to know that it is okay to break your routine and try something new. Her use of repetition emphasized on the different phrasing of “want” is used to dramatizes our emotional appeal towards the situation. Humans have their basic needs, but Roman let’s us know that it is alright to want to experience something new. She used repetition and emphasized over and over again the importance of self preservation and the ability to give not only your family the best but also yourself. Roman also added, “But I wised up. I don’t want to mess up in life again. I don’t want to let myself down. I don’t want to let my children down. I don’t want to let my father down” (820). The effectiveness of these sentences structures are outstanding. Not only does it bring forth the emotional appeal of your audience, but many audience can also easily relate. Letting people who you care about down might be the worst feeling in the world. Using repetition can help Roman reinforce her ideas to the audience and also persuade or convince the audience on the message of dedicating your time to your

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