Ian Brown Analysis

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“Who had the right to decide which life is worth living?” (Brown, paragraph 1) Ian Brown writes this in his essay about his son, Walker, and about genetic manipulation. I agree with his argument and I find that the essay is well constructed. Brown developed his argument by creating an essay by including many points that are well backed up, the point of views of different professionals, and by adding some personal experiences and quotes. He successfully displayed his argument and prove his points. Quite often in some essays, there are many points and facts that are just thrown out into the blue without any explanation or backup to hold the argument up. Although, Ian Brown provided multiple explanations and definitions. By doing so, it is easier …show more content…

This made it persuasive because instead of just stating scientific facts that support Brown’s views, he got to one’s emotions as well, Part of a conversation he had with his wife, Johanna, is included. They talked about if there had been a test that would have revealed Walker’s condition and if she would have aborted. One thing that Brown could not forget was, “A world where there are only masters of the universe would be like Sparta,” she said, “It would not be a kind country. It would be a cruel place.” (Brown, paragraph 31) By adding this example, it took my mind away from all the facts and think in a more realistic way. When she said that is was like saying that the slightest imperfection will lead to punishment. Another way that Ian Brown tugged at the heartstrings was when he talked about his walk with Walker, and how he tried to be interactive with him. He mentions the things they see and what he talks about. For example, “that Hungarian butcher has had that same side of meat hanging there for a year- let’s never eat I there.” (Brown, paragraph 43) Not only did he give a real-life example but he was also able to add some humour on this. I found that very effective because I got to stop thinking about modifications a bunch of facts and words, and could see it as something real something that is happening now in the

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