Fable Of The Mermaid And The Drunks

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Although “Fable of the Mermaid and the Drunks” by Pablo Neruda is the poem that is being compared, the fact that it was first written in Spanish and then translated in to English greatly changed the meaning of the two poems. Since there were different translators for both versions of the poem the word choice is slightly different; thereby, changing the whole message of the poem. That is why though the two poems should be one in the same the second poem makes the drunk men in the tavern seem harsher, and the mermaid more naïve than the first poem. The first evidence of the drunk men being harsher in the second poem than the first is in the third line, in which the difference of “they began to spit” and “began to spit at her” emphasizes the …show more content…

One such occasion is in the fourth line when there is the difference between newly, and recently used with knew, and understood respectively. The use of newly with knew shows that the mermaid’s normal life is so completely different that she simply does not know what is happening, and has no prior knowledge to draw from. In comparison the use of recently with understood shows that the mermaid has been out of the water before and should have knowledge of the land customs, but yet she still does not, meaning that she is not able to grasp concepts. Also the connotation with the words “understood nothing” makes it seem that the mermaid sees everything, but has no knowledge to compare it to therefore, leaving her dumb. The next point in which the mermaid’s naivety is showcased is within the eighth and ninth lines with the comparison between “not knowing” in the first poem, and “a stranger to” in the second poem. Again the line “not knowing” has a similar connotation to the line above using the word knew. On the other hand, the line “a stranger to” shows that the mermaid does not know of these things, which taking the knowledge of the previous line that she had come from the river before shows that the mermaid should have known about tears, and clothes. Also “a stranger to” gives the idea of someone looking in from the outside as they have not been invited in, this again …show more content…

Also the second poem shows the mermaid as more naïve than the first poem. Overall the comparison can be made that the drunken men are representative of mankind and their destructive nature; whereas, the mermaid is nature, in all of its

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