Examples Of Fantastic Response Prompts

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Ariel,
Fantastic response! Your responses to both prompts were accurate and showed me that you thoroughly thought through all of your responses. Fabulous work!
As I read through your response to prompt #1, I couldn’t help but agree. The quote that you mentioned bugged me as well, and I kept rereading that whole section of the essay because it didn’t seem to make sense. It seemed to me, as the reader, that Harrop was trying to make excuses to support her point rather than acknowledge that lives were in danger due to binge drinking. One of the significant problems with statistics is that they seem like they are just numbers, and as a result, most people cannot see that there are actual lives at stake because of the problem. And unfortunately,

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