College Admissions Essay: Passion Is My Driving Force Of Success

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Every step I take is a step I take with passion. Passion is my driving force of success. It causes me to work past my limits and boundaries to accomplish a greater goal. Passion is the shouting of my gray haired, cross country coach to keep going during a cross country race. Even when I feel like dying, wanting to tumble over and not get up again, I keep running. Once I finish the race, I’m filled with an overwhelming feeling of satisfaction. Passion is not falling down in the middle of the golf course or simply leaving a question blank on a test because of lack of knowledge. It is not a mean high school girl saying slanderous comments towards me. Passion doesn’t make me cry or give up on my dreams. Failure and quitting play no role in the passion lying within me. Passion is working not only for myself, but for others. My teammates. My coaches. My school. My community. It’s the force that keeps me pushing past my insecurities or fears. Gaining speed on the flats. Propelling myself up massive hills. Past my intimidating competitors. Striding towards the finish …show more content…

Then, as the season started up I pushed myself at every practice and ran my heart out every race the coach gave me the opportunity to run in. While some races were full of medals and praise from my peers and coaches, others were full of futile effort and frustration. Even when agonizing setbacks happened, my passion kept me working towards better times. After beating out my competitor for a prized position spot, I ended up accomplishing my goal of making state as a part of our team’s 4x8 relay. Completing my dream of competing on Drake University’s beautiful blue track. I was filled with a great sense of profound gratification and pure bliss. Sophomore track season showed me that passion can be the key to fulfilling my

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