Analyzing Jordan's Character

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From this script, I liked Jordan’s character the most because she seemed to be the most fleshed out. In most of her scenes, she offers those that she interacts with a clear and objective perspective in favor of taking a step back and seeing situations from different angles. Her character felt authentic, grounded, and completely relatable to the script’s message.

I also liked David’s father, Denny, and the different recalls of the day he was captured the writer incorporated throughout the script. Each new scene reveals more about his character and the person that he was without the details being filtered through someone else’s eyes. David saw his father as an unyielding stature of a man and not as a person who felt fear, pain, or doubt.

I also found it heartening that David …show more content…

This would have instantly created an emotional connection between the characters without the awkward and misguided infatuations and judgments from those around them when it was revealed Mary Ann was pregnant.

The writer states on page 28 that David did not believe Mary Ann when she told him she was seventeen, so why would he allow their relationship to become physical? Moreover, when David and Jordan pick up Mary Ann from the Pig Farm on page 22, she was half naked, so it is entirely plausible that it was there that she was sexually assaulted.

Likewise, I was surprised that Jordan did not think to ask the doctor at the hospital when she was brought in if they could check and see if Mary Ann had been assaulted. Why wouldn’t Mary Ann’s mother, Louise think to ask when she arrived at the hospital to get her daughter checked out? The point being, if David and Mary Ann’s relationship resembled that of siblings, her death would have had more of a substantial emotional

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