Analysis Of David Penberthy's Let The Penalty Fit Crime

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David Penberthy’s article ‘Let the penalty fit crime’ (2016) argues in support of a new plan, thought up by the nurses union, to deny treatment to violent drunk people who terrorise hospital emergency rooms. He also claims that this zero-tolerance plan could be used to resolve other violence related issues in Australia. Penberthy presents some strong points in his article but his failure to include all viewpoints on this issue and to consider any possible negative outcomes of these plans weakens his arguments and makes them sound biased rather than well rounded and thorough. Penberthy uses the personal experiences of medical staff to strengthen his argument; however, by purposefully not including any viewpoints of patients being refused treatment …show more content…

He begins his article with a very visual description of hospital emergency rooms on a Friday or Saturday night and also includes his own personal experience as evidence: ‘The scene outside the emergency department looked like the tail end of a rock festival, with people spewing in the carpark and, inside, others arguing with security and shouting at the nurses about the length of the wait.’ (Penberthy 2016, p. 68). The scene he sets has strong appeals to pathos as the text is rich in vivid descriptions and Penberthy uses this to set the tone of the argument. Penberthy further backs up his claim with social worker Les Twenyman’s, own first-hand experience of drunken gang violence in Footscray’s emergency department a few day prior to Melbourne’s CBD being terrorised by African gangs (Penberthy 2016, p. 68). Twenyman’s experience appeals to logos and pathos as the visual descriptions and emotionally loaded language cause the reader to feel concerned about the issue and it addresses their morals of right and wrong. For example, ‘One young man, bleeding from the mouth, was spitting blood on the hospital floor…’ (Penberthy 2016, p. 68). Penberthy continues to use these appeals to logos and pathos throughout the article in an attempt to make the reader agree with his views. Relying less on appeals to ethos pulls the article away from being an …show more content…

Throughout the article Penberthy uses a lot of slang words, mainly typical Australian slang, such as ‘yobbos’ and ‘spewing’ (Penberthy 2016, p. 68). This may appeal to the general audience the article is aimed at, however; it may also make the article less appealing to anyone in an authorial position as the slang makes the argument present more like a rant than a structured case. Penberthy also makes use of an active sentence to begin paragraph three, ‘We are seeing similar incidents right across Australia, and many medical staff now bear the psychological and even physical scars from encounters with the very people they are trying to assist.’ (Penberthy 2016, p. 68). This opening sentence bluntly explains just how bad the issue is and the article changes tone from here as it discusses the issue from the hospital emergency departments’ point of view. Penberthy also makes use of another active sentence to bring forward his own examples of how the zero-tolerance plan could be used in other violence related issues: ‘As a member of White Ribbon, I would never begrudge a cent being spent on fighting domestic violence but there is something so desperately unimaginative about using the dead hand of a tax grab as the immediate source of revenue.’ (Penberthy 2016, p. 68). He then continues with suggesting that the penalties for

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