A Rhetorical Analysis Of The Essay By Barron Thomas

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After completely reading the essay written by Barron Thomas, the first thing that was noticeable was the title and it was not attractive. It was too long and did not make sense. The essay thesis was notably vague for the reader and each topic sentence was defined. Barron had some organization in the introduction paragraph to help explain to the reader what should appear in the other paragraphs. Each paragraph after the introduction needed more supporting detail such as an example to give a clarification on how each person helped with his skills. The use of number in an essay should be written out unless it over hundred. There were a few run-on sentences. Barron wrote, “the reason why I must thank my mom is because she is the one who helped

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