Letter Of Recommendation Essay

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Dear University of California, Berkeley-- We understand. You are special. Everyone wants you, and considering the large volume of applicants you receive each year I am sure it is difficult distinguishing one amazing student from another. So while it is great that you want to give everyone a fair shot by accepting letters of recommendation from some applicants this upcoming fall, I believe that doing so will only increase students ' burden instead of alleviate it. I know this doesn’t affect me, since I am already in college and do not have a time machine in my possession. However, let me tell you the story of Sally Earnestchild. You are her first choice for college because you are more affordable than an Ivy League but still possess similar prestige. Though …show more content…

What you do the nine other UCs are expected to follow. Adopting this new policy can change the entire interface of the University of California system. A series of public universities will suddenly seem like an exclusive society one can only get into through the sponsorship of other people. It is unfortunate that students who apply to public universities are reduced to grades and test scores. However the personal statements are meant to compensate for that discrepancy. In a sense, they are like letters of recommendation-- except they are composed by the students who are recommending themselves to you. If anything, a personal composition is the greatest measure of a person 's character. You can not only judge them by the content of their essays, but also their style. A person 's writing can reveal a lot about them if read closely enough. It is not as if there is a shortage of students applying to your school. I personally find nothing wrong about your current policy of requesting supplemental letters from students you are on the fence about. You say this new policy is an attempt at being more "inclusive", but here is a radical idea: perhaps you could lower your

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