The Unexpected Visitor: A Narrative Fiction

The Unexpected Visitor
It was a rainy night. The dark clouds blocked the moon light from hitting the ground. Down on Earth, the Evergreens and other plants and trees shook violently in the wind. The rain water from above crashed onto them violently. The ground was covered with leaves and broken branches, barely visible during a night like this. There was also a great amount of fog throughout the woods. The huge mountains in the East were barely visible from here. There was a small town nearby, just across the road. The small trees around the houses were being illuminated by the faint lights of the lanterns that were put outside. Everything was silent, for it was late at night.
There was a sudden chill in the air, much colder than normal. There was a dark figure behind the trees, as if it was waiting for somebody. And then it raised its head and stared at the house in front of it. It was wearing a hooded cloak, with its face hidden in the darkness. Only two dark red eyes were visible. It lifted its right hand and there was an immediate boom in the air. The thunder had started, and the rain had turned into a blizzard of water. It was there for a few moments, and in the blink of an eye, it was gone.

The windows started to shake, slowed down, and shook again. The trees’ branches and twigs were scraping against them. The doors were locked, and the windows sealed shut. The wooden floor would creak every time someone walked over it. The house had one kitchen, two bedrooms, one living room, two baths, and one attic. The owner of the house, Connor Kurt, lay sleeping in the bedroom on the second floor. He was a tall man with dark black eyebrows and a long face. His body was very muscular and had big round eyes. His nose was very poi...

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...ng else were exactly the same as his. It was even wearing the exact same clothes.
“Who…”
And then for him, the world faded into a blank nothingness.

It was a beautiful morning, the birds were chirping, and you could feel the calming warmth of the sun outside. The sky was clear, the trees stood still, and the mountains were visible. The whole community was awake. Everyone was out eating breakfast and meeting and talking to each other. Everyone, except for one person. Connor Kurt was still lying on his bed, as calm and happy as ever. He stood up slowly and went to his bathroom to brush his teeth. He changed into his new clothes and looked out his window. Connor could see an unusual pile of dirt on the ground, deep in the forest. There were rocks and grass all over the place. He walked away and to his mirror, where he saw the dark, black gases coming out of him…