Personal Experience On The Beach

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Close your eyes and think of yourself laying in the nice warm sand right aide of the ocean. You hear the waves crashing against the coast as everything on your mind just slowly disappears. It just simply doesn’t get better than that. When you think of the Beach, a lot of people picture different places in their minds. When I picture the beach, it’s a place not too far from home, it’s the shores of Maryland and Delaware. I often find myself daydreaming of Ocean City. I believe it’s just because I was around the beach so much while growing up, that it’s just a second home to me. When this project was presented to me, I was told that we needed to pick a topic. I didn’t think for very long because immediately the thought of me getting to share my personal experience on the beaches with the rest of the class jumped out at me! Sure a lot of people may not like the beach, but what I hope to accomplish with my map is that people are interested so much that they want to give it another try or even try it …show more content…

I knew that I wanted to be able to mix the perfect combination of my opinion and factual information to grab the reader’s attention. If I were to put too much opinion into each of the topics, I knew it would become boring and people wouldn’t get to know the information that they wanted to. On the other hand, if I was to add too much factual information into my ideas people would be led off and just become bored. They wouldn’t be able to establish a personal connection with the text. In my opinion a paper that is primarily based on factual information is just annoying. If I wanted to read facts on a specific place, I would look it up online or even look in a travel brochure. This resource (My Map) here gives the readers some personal insight into what these places are like for families with children or elderly couples who don’t want to be mixed in the wrong

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