More Than Just The Disease

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More Than Just The Disease In ‘More Than Just The Disease’ by Bernard MacLaverty, Neil Fry, the principal character, is influenced by a minor character called Mrs Wan. Neil has a skin condition called psoriasis which has caused him to have low self esteem because his mother is ashamed of it and has made her son ashamed of it. However, Mrs Wan is the catalyst for the change and by the end of the story Neil has grown in confidence. Neil is in Scotland with his school friend, Michael, and his family the Middletons. The conflict between Michael and Neil is caused by Neil not wanting to go swimming because he is shy about his psoriasis. Michael accuses Neil of being “a useless bloody mama’s boy” which greatly upsets Neil leaving him desperate to return to his mother. Mrs Fry controls Neil. She is controlling Neil by sending him to a private school that he does not like where he is bullied by pupils and teachers, and insisting that he should go on holiday with the Middletons because Mr Middleton is a doctor. She does this because she has huge expectations for Neil to climb the social ladder and mix in with the middle class. MacLaverty uses italics to create Mrs Fry’s voice which Neil always hears; he constantly thinks about what his mother would say. From those comments we get the impression that Neil’s mother likes order “Be tidy at all times”, she does not like fancy things “A little ornate for my taste – vulgar almost”, wants the best for Neil “Now you’ll be at school with sons of doctors and lawyers”, and demands good manners “Close your mouth when you are eating please”. Neil is very reliant on his mother’s opinions. We can prove this by “he wondered if he should wear a tie to breakfast but his mother’s voice had nothing to... ... middle of paper ... ...chael walks in on Neil and Mrs Wan talking he sees Neil’s psoriasis and unexpectedly is not horrified. Mrs Wan proves that Mrs Fry has been wrong by not being what a middle class person would be like and showing Neil that his psoriasis is not a bad thing which his mother has been unable to do In conclusion Neil is a very shy boy who is brought up by his mother to think that all middle class people are posh. But when he goes on holiday with his friend, Michael, he meets Mrs Wan who makes him believe that his skin disease is normal and not to be ashamed about it. Neil is on his first step of independence but still has a long way to go. This is proved by Neil suggesting that Michael and him go down to the sea and swim. As Michael swims further out, Neil stays in the shallows which shows that he has grown but still has a long way to go.

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