The Use Of Forshadowing In Joan Bauer's 'Pancakes'

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Everybody desires to be perfect. As a matter of fact, people long to have more control of their lives, yet life does not work their way with problems everywhere happening. Joan Bauer's short story, "Pancakes," is about a girl, named Jill, and how she manages her work at a pancake house. One Sunday when Jill was working, a group of tourists arrived at her workplace. Jill, at that time, was the only waitress working at the diner, so she had to balance her “perfect” way of work as more and more customers walk in. Jill tries to maintain her “perfect” work, but the stress from customers caused her to fail at being perfect. The author’s overall argument in "Pancakes" was to show that it is impossible to be perfect through the use of foreshadowing, …show more content…

By using foreshadowing, the opening of the short-story reveals how Jill emphasizes on how she’s never messed up and how perfect her life is, yet at the end of the story she loses control of her life. At first, Jill explains about her workday and why it is pleasing to have so much authority in life. Then, Jill goes on to speak that she has everything under her control, as she says, “I never lose control” (83). As long as she always used her “perfect” ways to manage her life, she never lost control of her life. For this reason, the author had included that Jill never loses control is to foreshadow and have a prediction that Jill will lose control after the story. For the purpose of Jill losing control at the tip of the story, the author wanted to state that earlier. In fact, the foreshadowing had told us that she never loses control, although, at the end of the story, she gets overwhelmed with no control. After the tourists comes in and leaves, customers continue entering the diner. By herself, Jill tries to continue control her job, but fails when everything becomes a mess. She yelled, “I simply can’t do everything!”(88). The foreshadowing had told us that she never loses control, but yet she at the end of the story, she admits she can not do everything. When Jill could not control her problems, she gives up and realizes she can not do everything by herself. Just like …show more content…

The literary device reveals Jill overlooking her customers like a hawk, not missing a single detail and delivering the pancakes to her tables perfectly until a mob of tourists begin walking in that causes Jill to lose control. The pancake house has just opened and Jill was waiting for the mob of customers that will soon come in. Jill begins daydreaming ahead of how she would look and act perfectly doing her job. The author uses a simile to how Jill acts, “... watching my station like a hawk, keeping the coffee brewing, getting the pancakes delivered hot to the tables” (83). As a result, a hawk views their prey and then attacks which is similar to how Jill looked at the customers walking in and out. Like a hawk, Jill waits for customers to come in and take their orders right away, which is the same as a hawk with its prey. Hawks have sharp eyes meaning Jill does too, and that is why the author uses a simile to compare Jill and a hawk because that must mean Jill uses her eyes to check to see if anything is not perfect to her liking. In contrast, how Jill imagined herself to look like is different when a group of tourists arrive. Jill usually knows how to handle a certain amount of tourists, yet this time there was a bus full of them. Jill was horrified and scared because the “army of round, middle-aged women stepped from the bus and headed toward the

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