Student Ban: The Impact on Local Food Businesses

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Josie, Aw’jae, Efrain, Yajaira, Michelle, Belinda Introduction: Aw’Jae: Food business bans hungry hard working students from his restaurant at lunch time. Munchies owned by Mr. Jones bans students from his restaurant from his restaurant from 12­3 because he thinks they are loud and messy.The problem is that Mr. Jones is banning students from his restaurant during lunch time this affects the students because they can't go eat lunch.Even though Mr. Jones the owner of Munchies thinks banning students will bring him more business, banning students will also make him lose money in the long run because students also contribute, adults can be loud and messy too, and adult customers coming back is not promised. Michelle Moso­ Introduction: During the …show more content…

Everyone should have the right to do or go wherever they want they are not the ones to blame. Body Paragraph #3 Topic sentence #1 - What does the evidence say/show? What does this evidence mean/prove? Why does this evidence matter? Some may say students will not make Munchies restaurant grow in business; however,the less customers they allow, the less money they make, and Mr.Jones banning students will not promise that adults will be back. Basically what Mr. Jones is trying to do is get rid of all teenagers just like other business are driving away customers. What Mr. Jones is actually doing is losing business faster as he tries to get rid of teens who can also contribute. Meaning that Mr. Jones needs to make different choices by allowing teens in the restaurant, otherwise his business will not be any good and the restaurant will lose profit causing it to shut down. Allowing teenagers to his restaurant will make him gain more money if they are allowed to always eat there. This will help his business grow knowing a lot of customers will go and eat there since it has been known as a popular place to eat . Conclusion: What did you say/show in your

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