Structure And Characterization In The Minefield By Diane Thiel

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“The Minefield” by Diane Thiel is a poem about a man who grew up during a war and the impact that this man’s experience had on his behavior and on his family. He lost his friend in a tragic accident in a minefield when they were fleeing during the war, and holds onto that memory throughout his life. This memory causes him to be angry and have unpredictable behavior. Because he is impacted by this memory in the ways that he is, his experience affects his children nearly as much as it affects him. Thiel uses structure and characterization in the poem to show the readers how one experience influenced not only one man’s entire life, but also the lives of his family. Thiel’s use of structure is not one that is very common, but it is very effective
Thiel makes him young in the first stanza, but by the third stanza he is a much different character. The poem starts out with, “He was running with his friend from town to town. / They were somewhere between Prague and Dresden.” (1-2). The father grew up in the middle of a war torn country. The reader can see that he had no family because he wasn’t going from town to town with anyone in his family, he was going from town to town with another friend that most likely also didn’t have a family. It goes on to say, “He was fourteen. His friend was faster / and knew a shortcut through the fields they could take. / He said there was lettuce growing in one of them, / and they hadn’t eaten all day.” (3-6). The father was just a teenage boy when this happened to him. He was obviously not living the life of a boy who was a part of a happy family. He was hungry because he hadn’t eaten all day, because he had no one to feed him, so they decided to take a shortcut through a lettuce field. This decision seems harmless, but it was one that he would always remember. The actual incident only lasted for a very brief moment and in the poem, it lasted for only one line. The very end of the first stanza says, “like a wild rabbit across the grass, / turned his head, looked back once, / and his body was scattered across the field.” (7-9). The imagery that Thiel creates with the wild rabbit almost makes the boys appear more innocent.
The first lines in the third stanza are, “He brought them with him—the minefields. / He carried them underneath his good intentions.” (12-13). The minefields that the father carries with him are obviously not physical minefields. They could simply be memories, or his loneliness, or most likely fear. The father was not a bad man, but he was living in fear. This fear took over his life and was passed on to his children. In the third stanza Thiel wrote, “He gave them to us—in the volume of his anger, / in the bruises we covered up with sleeves.” (14-15). The father would be so angry that he would squeeze their arms so tight he left bruises. The poem goes on to say, “In the way he threw anything against the wall— / a radio, that wasn’t even ours, / a melon, once, opened like a head.” (16-18). Thiel uses wonderful imagery to show the reader the fear of the poem. The melon that “opened like a head” is frightening because the father so easily crushes is against a wall, something that can easily be compared to a human skull. The speaker also says “threw anything against the wall”, which means it was not a rare occurrence that this father would be so angry that he would throw objects against the wall. Towards the middle/end of the third stanza is where the reader starts to see the effects on the children. After talking about the melon the speaker goes on to

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