Rhetorical Analysis On Kevin Bray

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1. The thesis or argument of Kevin Bray’s essay is teenagers are absorbed by music and hooked to their phones. Therefore, it is influencing the students emotionally and physically in class. As a teacher, Kevin Bray uses evidence observed from his students. He refers to the students as “zombies” and “ICU patients because of their devotion to their phones and music. In paragraph 2, Kevin uses an example, which supports his argument. He says “They are plugged into a smartphone or iPod, and carry them like patients shuffling down the hospital hallway tethered to an IV drip.” He uses the rhetorical device, metaphor, to compare his students to patients in a hospital. This causes the reader to visualize the influence of these students based on their addiction to music and technology.

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The tone or attitude of this essay is brusque. Kevin Bray is very frank and straightforward in his argumentative essay. He is blunt about teenagers and their dependence on their phones and music. Within the first line of the essay, he compares his students to zombies or ICU patients, which generally convey the ideas of a souless corpse or living dead. In paragraph 3 he demonstrated another example. He says, “ Everyone is disengaged or hiding”. In this specific example, he is referring to his students who are hooked onto their phones instead of class and are not as engaged as they should be. In Bray’s opinion, the technology and music revitalize them otherwise they are like “zombies” or “ICU patients”.

3. A) Allusion: “I work with… Pod-bodies plugged into the matrix” Kevin Bray uses the rhetorical device allusion in this specific example to help enhance his writing. He makes a reference to the Matrix, which is it to help the readers make connections to the reference and understand it to a higher degree. In this example, the matrix is about a computer hacker who is hooked onto technology similarly to teenagers who are attached to their

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