Battling America's Obesity: A Dietary Crusader's Tale

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Hired to fix the dietary habits of America, a frustrated woman’s life is consumed with fighting an insatiable nemesis who’s in the business of making America fat, as the obesity crisis grows. BRIEF SYNOPSIS After the death of her father, who died from an unhealthy life style, Doris dedicates her life to change the way America eats. She’s hired by the USDA to fix the dietary habits of Americans. However, in the process, Doris faces an insatiable nemesis Ted, who markets corn syrup to the food industry and becomes rich off it. Doris creates a food pyramid to demonstrate a more balanced and healthier way of eating, but she’s greeted by strong oppositions from Ted, the food industry, and from political lobbyists. Everyone is addicted to sugar …show more content…

Doris vows never to give up the good fight. STORY COMMENTS SPOON FED is a smart title for this a satirical dramedy or dark comedy that is inspired by actual events that focuses on the food industry and the obesity crisis in America. The script captures a sarcastic and sardonic tone as it explores America’s obsession with sugar and one woman’s consuming life battle for a healthier America. The tone is actually engaging. The topic is absolutely relevant and explores man’s obsession with food, especially sugar. Ironically, it’s a bittersweet story in which the battle for a healthier America is met by strong opposition from all sides. The script examines the theme of self-control. The script is well researched. While the message is loud and clear and the themes strong, the overall script would benefit from more development. The areas to discuss include the structure and the style of storytelling, the tension, and the pace, as well as further character development. The script begins strongly. The obesity chart and opening voiceovers set the tone and the audience is easily pulled into this world. Doris’s goal is well defined, but the stakes are not as well defined for Doris, as it is for the consumer. Thus, unfortunately, as the script progresses, it feels more like a history and educational lesson about the food industry rather than a real

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