Muir's Childhood

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Everyone’s childhood must end eventually. In Edwin Muir’s “Childhood,” the boy, the subject of the poem, struggles to hold onto his fading childhood. Utilizing the varying sentence and stanza compositions, gloomy words, and the rhyme scheme of the poem, Muir creates a clear divide between childhood and adulthood and centers the poem around the life phase between the two, adolescence. In “Childhood,” the boy’s surroundings correspond to phases of life: the “black islands” represent childhood and the ship represents adulthood. The area where the “massed islands” occupy far in the distance are primarily manifested from the boy’s imagination. The “unseen straits,” for instance, exemplify a child’s creative mind during childhood, because though …show more content…

The first stanza, in which the boy has not escaped to the islands yet, is evenly divided into two two-lined sentences. The boy’s consciousness is still at his physical location, on the “sunny hill to his father’s house” (lines 1-2), and so to mimic order and reality, the stanza is divided in an organized, acceptable manner—one sentence per two lines. In the next two stanzas, the boy begins to lose himself in his thoughts about the islands, and simultaneously, the sentence layouts become more creative. The second stanza is written all in one sentence, and the third is written in two sentences of unequal length—the first occupying just one line and the second spanning the rest of the three lines of the stanza. In these stanzas, the orderly form breaks as if to resemble the act of a child …show more content…

While the first four stanzas of the poem all follow an ABAB pattern, the last stanza follows an AAAA pattern. The last words of all four lines of the last stanza (“lay”, “came”, “away”, and “name”) rhyme only with the last words of the second stanza’s second and fourth lines (“away” and “lay”), the lines that mention the main components of the boy’s fantasy world, the “massed islands” and the “unseen straits.” This indirect reference to the islands and straits shows that even though in the second-to-last stanza, where the ship begins to lurk in, the boy’s desire to preserve his childhood grows even stronger. Furthermore, like the second stanza, the last stanza is written all in one sentence. Muir’s emphasis on coming back to the second stanza shows how the boy is unaffected by the attempt of intrusion of the adult world, as the boy remains strongly connected to his

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