Literary Analysis: "The Perks of Being a Wallflower" and "Hill Like White Elephants"

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The nature of human communication requires that only a certain number of details may be expressed. A photograph leaves out what is beyond its frame, statistical data generalizes answers into categories to make results meaningful, and words distinguish between specific concepts to present ideas. The author of a written work chooses the details to express not only what they want, but how they want the audience to feel about it. I will analyze what the author chooses to include and to ignore in The Perks of Being a Wallflower by Stephen Chbosky and “Hills Like White Elephants” by Ernest Hemmingway.

The first and more easily recognizable choice that Chbosky makes in his writing style is to tell the story in letter format, including introductions and dates. He conveniently leaves out and changes names, and refuses to give any real indication of who he is writing to or why he is writing other than him “need[ing] to know there is someone out there who will listen” (2). This is done to make the fiction come alive and to sound probable in spite of it being fiction. By having Charlie write directly to the audience and framing them as caring, “look[ed] to for strength and friendship”, and generally nice, it gives the reader the role of intimately empathizing with the character in spite of the fictional and widely publicized nature of the book (2). Charlie approaches his letters with a normal letter writing style by always referring to himself in the first person, writing erratic plot structures, and starting his letters off with questions like “I never told you I was in shop class, did I?” or with a development in something he described in an earlier letter(12). Without this opening section and the author’s reinforcing of the reader’s rol...

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...of his surroundings and past, while leaving out any other perspectives or any deep judgments of character, making Charlie seem alienated, surface level observant, and non judgmental-as if he cannot act on the things he discovers. Charlie comes across to the audience as thoughtful, disturbed, and good natured, although naïve. Hemmingway, on the other hand includes relatively insignificant details about the surroundings of his scene while including really metaphorical conversation topics in the bulk of his work. He excludes obvious portrayals of intent or any wide ranging conclusions. This makes Hemmingway’s story seem vague and hard to follow while not seeming to say anything really definite at all. Both stories show a unique way of handling what they want to express while maintaining separate and distinct choices of what kind of details matter and which do not.

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